Bonjour pouvez-vous me corriger ce texte s'il vous plaît ?Je voudrais être sure de ne pas avoir fait d'erreurs .

We would like that this lead people to do sport and create bond through sport .So we would like that the access would free . To finance this project we need about twenty thousand dollars .So we are going to create a communal jackpot to ensure that people who want participate can. Moreover we will contact partners to sponsor our project .

Merci d'avance .

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Bonjour pouvez-vous me corriger ce texte s'il vous plaît ?Je voudrais être sure de ne pas avoir fait d'erreurs .

We would like that this lead people to do sport and create bond through sport .So we would like that the access would free . To finance this project we need about twenty thousand dollars .So we are going to create a communal jackpot to ensure that people who want participate can. Moreover we will contact partners to sponsor our project .

Merci d'avance .
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bonjour

We would like to help  people to work out  (work out = faire du sport) and create friendship (attachment) between people through sport (work out évite la répétition). The access should be free (ou) People shouldn't pay any charge. To make this project come true, we need about twenty thousand dollars. That's why we are going to create  a communal jackpot (tu as voulu dire une espèce de loterie)   we are going to organize a lottery to make sure that people willing to participate can do it. Moreover , we are going to get
in touch with partners to  help us and sponsor our project.

je suis resté sur loterie parce su'on gagne la "cagnotte, le "jackpot" de la loterie .
J'espère que ça t'ira

bonne nuit :)